Hi, I made the first episode of my own independent fictional series called The Potter. It’s a colorful, absurd, character-driven show set in the Squish.tv universe. The tone is playful, weird, and inspired by reality competition shows, but it is not animation.

I’m looking for honest feedback on: - whether episode 1 is easy to understand without context - whether the characters feel memorable - whether the pacing works - whether the humor lands - whether the episode makes you want to watch episode 2 This is not a paid promotion. I’m mainly trying to improve the next episode. What should I change or improve? submitted by /u/TwistHuman3816 [link] [comments]